OMG0.o ................I think I've met the master of fanfictions. This story makes so much sense, it slapped me in the face.
It's so sad!!!!! I wanna to adopt L!!!!!!!!!!
oh my... this is very sad... and very awesome...
L is the best amine character of them all. And this was the best fanfic-no-best writing that I have ever read. 10/5
I wish to see more ^-^
your a good writer don't stop. and don't mind my critical comments, it's a habit I got from helping my friends with there story writing, it's my job to pick out the holes in the plots
you made me cry. this is really good. my only problem is at the very end it says he wanted to become a detective for justice but somewhere in the manga at least, it does actually mention he doesn't do what he does for justice... other than that this could most certainly be what happened to poor L. just so you know it is really hard to make me cry when reading a story. i read adult horrors where people are often dying or something thats meant to make you cry but i never do. but this did make me cry, Well done
GO L YOU RULE
Wow
i guess i didnt cry, but when the gun was fired in Ls direction, i flinched.
dont know why since i knew he wasnt going to be shot.lol, very good thogh
Thanks so much! I'm glad to hear that you like it so much! :)
Yes, right now I'm in the process of writing chapter two....so hopefully I can get it on here not terribly too much longer.
I-I wanna hear more, please continue; this is the best fanwords ever!!! that was really good; it tells you where he gets his suger addiction from, and ect. Keep it up, I really want to hear chapter 2 =']
That was such a good story!! Poor L, he really deserved a better life. This was a sad but nice story. One of the best DN fanficts of L's past that I've read, it's actually similar to the way I thought his past to be. Accept without the drunk mom. I think that he lived in a small rural town in England with a caring mother and his father died, later his mom died and he was taken by Wammy to the orphanage.
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 10/19/09 | Reply
@RaionChanx3:
Well, chapter two is already posted in my world, if you haven't checked that out yet.
But as for chapter 3....still in the process of writing.
And for knowing when I have updated, you can favorite me and then when I have updated one of my worlds...you will be informed.
And thank you for reading. ^^
RaionChanx3
Title: Otakuite | Posted 10/07/09 | Reply
when is the next one coming out? how do i know u've updated? thank u ^^
Okami13
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 09/10/09 | Reply
OMG0.o ................I think I've met the master of fanfictions. This story makes so much sense, it slapped me in the face.


It's so sad!!!!! I wanna to adopt L!!!!!!!!!!
Juurii chan
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
@xXDamnationXx:
Your are very welcome!

xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
@Juurii chan:
Yes, L is the BEST anime character and shall forever be.
Best writing you ever read?
Wow!
What a compliment!
Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!
Juurii chan
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 07/16/09 | Reply
oh my... this is very sad... and very awesome...
L is the best amine character of them all. And this was the best fanfic-no-best writing that I have ever read. 10/5
I wish to see more ^-^
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/16/09 | Reply
@Vixen Vectressa:
Ah, an editor by habit?
Well, I can be like that at times too so I understand.
Vixen Vectressa
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 07/16/09 | Reply
@xXDamnationXx:
your a good writer don't stop. and don't mind my critical comments, it's a habit I got from helping my friends with there story writing, it's my job to pick out the holes in the plots
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/16/09 | Reply
@Vixen Vectressa:
Well, yes justice is not the only reason why he wanted to be a dectective......I know.
Well, I'm glad that you were so touched by this story.
And thanks for reading!
Vixen Vectressa
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 07/15/09 | Reply
you made me cry. this is really good. my only problem is at the very end it says he wanted to become a detective for justice but somewhere in the manga at least, it does actually mention he doesn't do what he does for justice... other than that this could most certainly be what happened to poor L. just so you know it is really hard to make me cry when reading a story. i read adult horrors where people are often dying or something thats meant to make you cry but i never do. but this did make me cry, Well done
GO L YOU RULE
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/04/09 | Reply
@Kkun:
Thanks so much.
And yes, L is the best and always will be the best.
Kkun
Title: Otakuite | Posted 07/04/09 | Reply
wow... thats a great fanfict... i like it very much specially L.. he;s d best...
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/03/09 | Reply
@shine moonlight:
I completely understand.
That would be so great if he was in our world. :)
shine moonlight
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/03/09 | Reply
Go! Lawlight Go! nice to know the past and at the same time sad
i love L too! wish he was in our world!
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/30/09 | Reply
@Mello4eva:
Thanks!! :)
Mello4eva
Title: Otakuite | Posted 06/29/09 | Reply
Wow
i guess i didnt cry, but when the gun was fired in Ls direction, i flinched.
dont know why since i knew he wasnt going to be shot.lol, very good thogh
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/24/09 | Reply
@:
Your welcome. ^^
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/24/09 | Reply
@:
Thank you so much!! :)
Trust me, I even cried while I was writing this. :(
Anyways, you can go to my world, xXxDaRk DeScEnDaNtSxXx to read chapter 2.
I'm still trying to get it published.
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/17/09 | Reply
@Kyubi Elric:
Thank you very much!
Well, I already posted chapter two.
But for some reason it's not published yet.
But you can visit my world, xXDaRk DeScEnDaNtSXx, to read it though.
Kyubi Elric
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/17/09 | Reply
Hey, since this is chapter 1 when are you ganna post chapter 2? I love to read fanficts and your's are really good.
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/16/09 | Reply
@SirLawliet:
Awwww
Well, I'm glad that you were touched by this story. ^^
SirLawliet
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 06/16/09 | Reply
Very nice. L is my all time favorite. So I was actually touched when reading this.
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 05/10/09 | Reply
@RIAHPAGE:
Thanks so much!!
RIAHPAGE
Title: Otakuite | Posted 05/09/09 | Reply
@xXDamnationXx:
I've read alot of posts about L's past but, this is the best one yet! that was so sad.. but it was incredibly good.
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/19/09 | Reply
@Ichigoslilsista:
Glad your excited!
Thanks again!! :D
Ichigoslilsista
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 04/18/09 | Reply
@xXDamnationXx:
^u^ YAY!!! I'm so exited, I really love your work XD
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/18/09 | Reply
@Ichigoslilsista:
Thanks so much! I'm glad to hear that you like it so much! :)
Yes, right now I'm in the process of writing chapter two....so hopefully I can get it on here not terribly too much longer.
Ichigoslilsista
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 04/17/09 | Reply
I-I wanna hear more, please continue; this is the best fanwords ever!!! that was really good; it tells you where he gets his suger addiction from, and ect. Keep it up, I really want to hear chapter 2 =']
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/12/09 | Reply
@LawlietLover13:
Thanks so much!!!!!!!
LAWLIET IS THE BEST EVER!
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/12/09 | Reply
@SachiroUchiha:
Sorry, 'bout that.
*Hands over tissue box*
Don't worry, I cried while writing this.
Thanks though!
LawlietLover13
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/12/09 | Reply
Wow...that was an insanely awesome story! You wrote it so well! It was great!
(hugs and faves) I LOVE LAWLIET! 
SachiroUchiha
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/10/09 | Reply
That's amazing! It's so good, thankyou!!!! (although not for tearing up and ruining my vision as i tried to read the rest of the fanfic)
great story
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/06/09 | Reply
@Kyubi Elric:
Thanks, I appreciate it!
Your story sounds really good too!
Kyubi Elric
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 04/05/09 | Reply
That was such a good story!! Poor L, he really deserved a better life. This was a sad but nice story. One of the best DN fanficts of L's past that I've read, it's actually similar to the way I thought his past to be. Accept without the drunk mom. I think that he lived in a small rural town in England with a caring mother and his father died, later his mom died and he was taken by Wammy to the orphanage.
MewChero
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/03/09 | Reply
@xXDamnationXx:
NP. It's amazing and I had to tell you. ^.^
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/02/09 | Reply
@MewChero:
Thanks so much!!
That's such a great thing to hear!!!!!!
Thanks again, I appreciate it!!!!!
MewChero
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/02/09 | Reply
O.O So AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think it's so cute and sad. It's one of the best DN fanfic I've read.
shinigami117
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 04/02/09 | Reply
@xXDamnationXx:
No prob
xXDamnationXx
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/02/09 | Reply
@shinigami117:
Thanks!
Glad to hear that, it means a lot to me!!!!!!
shinigami117
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 04/02/09 | Reply
That's the best story of L's past I've ever read!
xXxMurakixXx
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/24/09 | Reply
*Cries*
It's so good. ^^
Your very talented!!!